Writing Fiction

Maggie tries to handle the Snow Storm!

She has long Blonde hair with light brown highlights and blue eyes that are as clear as the ocean. She sits by the window all bundled up as the white snow falls fast outside, leaving her stuck inside with no luck going to her holiday party at work. Her boss had canceled the party as the mayor of her town had put out a city-wide warning for everyone to stay inside, and she is now stuck with a double chocolate cake and her ½-gallon homemade eggnog. She had picked out the perfect red dress with extended shelves on it with a slight low cut in the front, a white snowflake necklace and earrings, and the most excellent white shiny clear shoes. She felt like if the party could not happen, she could dress up and have fun while sitting by the fire watching a movie.

So Maggie dressed up and cut a slice of the cake, poured a glass of eggnog, put on a movie, set on the logs in her fireplace, and lit the fire until it burned and burned. The crackling of the fire relaxed her as the heat warmed over her body. The movie made her laugh and smile at the joy of Christmas; soon, the time passed as Maggie watched movie after movie. She did not notice that the snow had picked up; snowflakes had grown in size, and the snow was about a foot up her back door.

Soon, it grew dark outside, and Maggie decided to go to bed for the night. As she slept, the snow storm picked up, and the snow fell and fell and fell until it would be impossible for her to go anywhere for the next couple of days. She woke up early, hoping she could go outside and be a big kid again, play in the snow, and make snow angels and a snowman that she would dress up with her decorations.

As she descended the stairs and looked out her back door, she realized she was shocked at how much snow was outside her house. Because of how bad the weather was, her joy of going out and spending time in the snow quickly faded away as she realized she was stuck. She started to panic, for she had no clue how long it would take for the snow to melt if anyone else got out and how long it would take if she did need help.

It took all the strength and patience to calm herself down. Thirty minutes later, she decided she should call out and see how everyone was, for she knew some of her family and friends might be panicking, too. So, the following hours she spent calling and talking to everyone she knew, and so far they were all fine and going to see how the others were and safety staying inside by the fire, hoping the sun would come out soon and melt the giant hill of snow away so they could go out and enjoy it. After all her phone calls, Maggie soon found herself making some hot chocolate with tons of marshmallows and looking out her back window at all the things covered in snow.

All her backyard decorations vanished before the surface of the snow. She didn’t want to look out the front but was curious about how much worse it may look. She quickly walked to the front of the house through her long hallway leading to her massive living room, for she had forgotten her socks, and her oak wooden floors were cold. She didn’t know how long her poor little toes could take as they felt like she was walking on a block of ice.

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A loner doing the unexpected!

He had always been the person that was alone, he went to the movies alone, he ate out alone, and he loved long walks alone. So when he gets the chance to go on a winter trip free to a cabin at a popular ski and snow lodge. He could not say no to his boss that wanted him to enjoy himself for once and it was a paid for vacation with an all paid allowance for food and free  two week pass for snowboarding and skiing on the slopes and he got free lessons if he didn’t know how to snowboard or ski.

Ed felt lucky for the first time in his life and he was looking forward to sometime on his own in a new place. Two long hours driving down a long-winded road of nothing but curves after curves surrounded by green grass and clumps of trees and one or two houses to big luxury cabins, Ed arrives at his destination. A modern medium size wooden cabin with a driveway with couple trees surrounding it. He could see the ski and snowboarding lodge in the distances behind the cabin. As Ed unlocks the door to his home for two weeks he gasp as he opens the door and see such a beautiful crystal chandelier leading the way to a nice great size living room.

With a nice red and gray stone fireplace that is electrical and not a traditional fireplace, which is great for Ed, does not want to have to cut wood or find wood to make a fire when it gets cold. The next day the sun is shining so bright as its warm heat gently brushes up against Ed’s face, he slowly wakes up, and after a quick breakfast, he heads down to the Lodge to check out what he could get into for the day. He feels restless as lots of people and families quickly surround him as they move along to the many events and activities going on today.

Ed quickly gets pulled with a family of five who  don’t notice his not one of them until he is at the rental center and they start saying their sizes and the father turns to him and say what do you need Timmy but realize his talking to a grown man and not his 14 year old son. Ed looks at the man and introduces himself and the man does the same his name is Sam and his with his wife Emily and his two kids.

His daughter Amy whose nine years old and his son Timmy who is 14 years old, they are taking snowboarding lessons and was just picking out their boards. Ed could not believe his eyes that he was in  a deep conversion with them, and was being friendly and nice to complete strangers when he usually the person to roll his eyes at kids and their parents who can’t control them or how happy they are together.

 

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A woman on the bus with her Pekineses dog inside her handbag both dressed in red.

It was the anniversary of Susan getting her dog coca five years ago. She felt that they needed to celebrate, and the best way would be to go to Coca favorite Doggy Park. As Susan dresses up in her red sweater and puts a matching red bow on Coca, they walked out of the house with Coca in her purse.
She approaches her gray 2007 Nissan car, opens the door and, takes Coca out to sit in her favorite dog seat.
As she puts the key in the ignition and turns, the car makes a noise like it’s about to start, but it shuts off, she tries again, but it won’t start.
She becomes frustrated as she just got her car fixed and picked it up on Tuesday, and it is now Saturday.
She looks at her watch and realizes that if she leaves now, she will make it to the park at 1:00 pm when the party starts. Then, she sees the bus coming; she quickly gets her purse, puts Coca back in, and runs to the bus stop.
The big white and green city-bus pulls up, and the doors open, and she climbs on, pays, and quickly takes a seat in the front of the bus. Giving Coca a view of the window as she looks up and sees she has six stops until she gets to Skylark park, where everyone is waiting for them.

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BAD AND GOOD Day for Writing!

Good day

She sits at the dinner table, writing a poem for school. The warm heat from the fire calms her as she tries to come up with something good to share in front of her class. However, the truth is her problem is about standing up in front of everyone. She gets up to make some tea to help with her nervous, as she sips her peppermint tea, the words begin to flow onto her paper.

Bad day

She sits down on her couch with her favorite white and blue polka-dotted fleece blanket, just as she settled in with the final draft of her book. She hears, give it back to me. Screamed from the top of her son’s lungs. Quickly taking the stairs, down the hall, she goes to find to her shock. Her oldest son’s room is a mess as if a small tornado had come crashing through the door. There were white t-shirts and blue denim jeans everywhere in the middle of it all her two sons struggling with each other as Ben tries to get back his jersey. She yells, “Hey, knock it off and clean up this mess; you are too old to be making this mess.” An hour goes by as she talks them about taking each other things and how she hopes next time they act more mature about the matter. They apologies to her and each other as they clean up the room. As she walks down the hall and the stairs, she looks upon her twisted up blanket and her final draft on the floor and feels tired. She grabs her blanket and soon falls asleep with her final draft on the floor for another day.

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Our Love Story (Reviewing and Redrafting)

Second verse: The first thing I heard on the radio was Grace Mitchell Live “Jitter”

 

It was one of the coldest days of my life, where getting up and going out in the snow required two to three layers to feel like I was alive. After hours of shoveling the layers and layers of snow, I finally went inside to have a cup of hot cocoa. Just then, my friend Tammy called me up saying she had gotten some great seats up in the front at the Lights off concert hall in the summer and wanted me to go because it has been far too long for me to go without some fun.

So I agreed a couple of months later on June 21, 2015, we headed into town with some friends. Arriving at the concert hall a little before 5 pm, I walked past the small park that leads me up to the north gate. I could see a couple of girls with blue denim jeans with different color shirts already waiting in line at the gate. One was applying on makeup that made her look like a little orange. To the side, I could see a dirt path leading to the south gate, which my friend Tammy said we had to go to get in for the gate crasher. I could see the main stage barely through the tall gates and trees was open, it looked to have roughly 3,000 seats inside covered by a brown wooden roof. A long line of people waited outside excited to get inside and party the tension way from their long day at work/school. Some were excitedly talking to their friends about how they could not wait to get inside and hear the Grace Mitchell sing. 

As we got closer to the door, I felt like I had nothing to lose, as we headed to our sits and the opening act came on it felt like everyone was dancing off the jitters from being so close to everyone and started to move to the music. Dancing with my friends, I happened to look next to me and, I noticed you in your orange t-shirt shining like the sun; it was hard to look away as your moves made me want to remember this night forever. I told you I liked your dance moves and we introduced ourselves, your name was Sam and, I said mine was Emily and as the opening act went off and my friends with to get drinks. We sat there talking about everything; I never thought I could be this open with someone who was just a stranger to me moments ago.

Then the lights slowly dimmed as Grace Mitchell came on stage and screamed, “Everyone ready to have a good time,” tons of people screamed “Yes” at her. I looked at you with a smile on my face as we began to move to the first song, “Jitters.” The music just suddenly related to this moment of meeting you and, I did not want to go home if it meant I wouldn’t see you again. As I turned to you and the song mentioned something about kissing, I couldn’t help myself and, I leaned towards you and, your eyes grew wide like a deer in headlights, but then you smiled and, we shared our first kiss.

I did not know how to behave around and hoped you would show me how too. As the show came to an end four hours later, I felt like a magician pulling from his bag of tricks as I moved my body to the music captivating you as the lights played off my body like a lighting show. You said you never saw something so breathtaking so close up before. It was like watching your favorite show on TV and, you couldn’t risk taking your eyes away and missing the best part. We became one that night blossoming our love. We left our old life in pieces on the floor that night and never looked back.

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Our Love Story (verse one)

First verse: The first thing I heard on the radio was Grace Mitchell Live “Jitter”

I wanted to have some fun for the first time of my adult life so of course I let my girls drag me out to the new club in town. Soon arriving at an old red brick building that had a sign that read, “Turn off the Lights”, a long line of people waited outside hyped to get inside and party the tension way from their long day at work. As we got closer to the door I felt like I had nothing to loss, as we headed to the dance floor it felt like everyone was dancing off the jitters from being so close to everyone and started to truly move to the music. Dancing with my friend Liza and Tammy as Sammy and Danielle went to get us drinks and a table. I noticed you in your orange t-shirt shining like the sun; it was hard to look away as your moves heated me up making me want to not know how to get home if it meant I got to kiss you. I did not know how to behave around you but I hope you would show me how too and I wonder did you want to mess with me get into my bag of tricks and keep dancing our jitters away as we become one on the dance floor.

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Sara’s Story (Starting in the past)

Sara has long brown hair that hangs from her shoulders as she holds on to her brown bag for dear life. Her light brown eyes show the sadness floating in her life like dark clouds announcing the coming of the storm. She walks down the street looking for someone or something to full; the emptiness she feels inside, wishing things could have been different with her life. When Sara was younger, she grew up in a household with two beautiful older sisters and felt she was not beautiful or cool enough to be someone who mattered. She spent all her time trying to be someone she was not, by the time those years were over she had no clue who she was as an adult. She had no sense of who was her real friends and who really cared about her for she had faked being happy all the time and had gone to parties when she was happier just being at home watching a good movie. Then she met Mike in college and for the first time she felt like herself, she was happy, laughing all the time, and going out was not so bad. Mike was her first true friend and he made her happy and sad when they fought over the small things but he always kept it real with her. It was hard for her now not to talk to him.

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Sara’s Story

Sara has long brown hair that hangs from her shoulders as she holds on to her brown bag for dear life. Her light brown eyes show the sadness floating in her life like dark clouds announcing the coming of the storm. She walks down the street looking for someone or something to full; the emptiness she feels inside.
Wishing things could have been different with her friendship with Mike. The wind starts to blow it is so cold that her fingers, begin to tingle, she quickly starts to button up her brown jacket and pull up the collar to try to block out the wind.
After realizing that the wind is not going to die down, she decides to go back inside to her empty apartment and hope that the wind will die down, maybe tomorrow will be a warmer day.
Maybe a cup of hot peppermint tea in her favorite blue cup will help lift her from this cold day. Later that day, Mike calls Sara up, and they talk and talk for hours as the wind blows outside, blowing leaves in all directions.
Just like their friendship, it could blow in any direction.
Creating a new journey, the colors of the leaves start to distract Sara.
The colors fading together create new hope in Sara’s life.
Her sadness falls away like the leaves on the tree.

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