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Daily Prompt: Eyes

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Your eyes I could stare at forever 

there the color blue like a breathtaking 

view of a clear clean ocean.

They light up when you smile and dim to really

dark blue when your mad or sad.

You look at everyone with so much openness with those eyes of yours.

You never seem to want to hide your emotions behind these eyes.

You’re not afraid of being emotional and yet you are the strongest guy I know.

You don’t back down or give up on anyone to quickly.

Your eyes are the first thing I noticed when I first met you and your eyes are always the last thing I see at night.

 

Written By: Deirdre Stokes 

Daily Prompt: Eyes

8 thoughts on “Daily Prompt: Eyes”

  1. Claudia Hernandez – I'm made of words, stories and poetry. I think, create and tell. ps. you will support me a lot if you don't run Adblock while visiting! Estoy hecha de palabras, cuentos y poesía. Pienso, creo y cuento. ps. me apoyarías mucho si desactivas Adblock mientras visitas!
    Claudia Hernandez says:

    What a beautiful image you’ve transmitted with this. i really liked reading this because I felt the love haha:)

    1. mywords2228 – Love writing poetry and reading tons of books. I also write short fiction stories and hope to include them on my page soon; I hope you enjoy my work, and thanks for stopping by my page.
      mywords2228 says:

      You’re welcome! I’m glad you enjoyed reading this piece! 🙂

    1. mywords2228 – Love writing poetry and reading tons of books. I also write short fiction stories and hope to include them on my page soon; I hope you enjoy my work, and thanks for stopping by my page.
      mywords2228 says:

      Thanks Laura, I’m glad you enjoyed this piece! 🙂

    1. mywords2228 – Love writing poetry and reading tons of books. I also write short fiction stories and hope to include them on my page soon; I hope you enjoy my work, and thanks for stopping by my page.
      mywords2228 says:

      Thank you! And I’m a sucker for a nice smile!

  2. What a beautiful poem, yes the eyes are such an amazing part of the human body. It’s the one which betrays lies, lights up when they see a loved one, and show emotion when you’re trying to hide it. I love reflecting about eyes, well done once again! 🙂

    1. mywords2228 – Love writing poetry and reading tons of books. I also write short fiction stories and hope to include them on my page soon; I hope you enjoy my work, and thanks for stopping by my page.
      mywords2228 says:

      Thank you!

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