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Crashing

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Down is my spirit right now as I just get tired of overworking myself.

It all feels like everything I’ve been holding in is about to explored and so.

I’m trying to not look anyone in the eye or  I feel something will happen.

My body is shutting down as it prepares for the battle that will come.

I just hope I can get through these things I have to face soon.

For I know if I don’t get it together the worst is to come.

My insides feel like they are on fire and even though I feel the coldness around me, I just can’t shake the heat that is burning me up.

 

Written By: Deirdre Stokes

11 thoughts on “Crashing”

  1. chris jensen – Right where i am supposed to be! – i am no different than any other human, struggling throughout life's disadvantages... As i have been learning throughout my own poetry, whom i could be! A gifted child.....
    chris jensen says:

    Hang in there darling, just a little storm right now, sunshine is on it’s way…

    1. mywords2228 – Love writing poetry and reading tons of books. I also write short fiction stories and hope to include them on my page soon; I hope you enjoy my work, and thanks for stopping by my page.
      mywords2228 says:

      I hope so!

      1. chris jensen – Right where i am supposed to be! – i am no different than any other human, struggling throughout life's disadvantages... As i have been learning throughout my own poetry, whom i could be! A gifted child.....
        chris jensen says:

        Just wondering, by the time i answer you..

        Could now be feeling better. yes – no?

        1. mywords2228 – Love writing poetry and reading tons of books. I also write short fiction stories and hope to include them on my page soon; I hope you enjoy my work, and thanks for stopping by my page.
          mywords2228 says:

          Yes,I’m feeling much better. Thanks for asking!

          1. chris jensen – Right where i am supposed to be! – i am no different than any other human, struggling throughout life's disadvantages... As i have been learning throughout my own poetry, whom i could be! A gifted child.....
            chris jensen says:

            I’m extremely happy for you!

            However this is a new day, and?

            1. mywords2228 – Love writing poetry and reading tons of books. I also write short fiction stories and hope to include them on my page soon; I hope you enjoy my work, and thanks for stopping by my page.
              mywords2228 says:

              I’m good just enjoying the new year so far.

              1. chris jensen – Right where i am supposed to be! – i am no different than any other human, struggling throughout life's disadvantages... As i have been learning throughout my own poetry, whom i could be! A gifted child.....
                chris jensen says:

                Did you leave the old-year behind?

                1. mywords2228 – Love writing poetry and reading tons of books. I also write short fiction stories and hope to include them on my page soon; I hope you enjoy my work, and thanks for stopping by my page.
                  mywords2228 says:

                  Yup!

                2. chris jensen – Right where i am supposed to be! – i am no different than any other human, struggling throughout life's disadvantages... As i have been learning throughout my own poetry, whom i could be! A gifted child.....
                  chris jensen says:

                  i had hoped for a do over?

                3. mywords2228 – Love writing poetry and reading tons of books. I also write short fiction stories and hope to include them on my page soon; I hope you enjoy my work, and thanks for stopping by my page.
                  mywords2228 says:

                  oh, I think we all would love a do over at some point in our lives. But, it seems all we can do is move forward.

                4. chris jensen – Right where i am supposed to be! – i am no different than any other human, struggling throughout life's disadvantages... As i have been learning throughout my own poetry, whom i could be! A gifted child.....
                  chris jensen says:

                  some of us, can move anyway they want in time!

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